: Come in and talk about 2 cents

: Come in and talk about 2 cents

Come in and talk about two cents

The plot of "Iron Man" has ended. Before I opened this copy, I was full of confidence, but the readers slapped me hard!

Subscription data fell by leaps and bounds, and fell by one-third of the peak period. I don’t know if it was because of unstable updates during this period, or because everyone didn’t like this plot, or both.

If it is an update problem, two updates of 6000 words will be stabilized next week, and the update activities will continue.

If it's a plot issue, I read everyone's comments, and the main feedback is as follows.

First, at the beginning of the chapter, I used a lot of ink to describe the perspective of Iron Man.

This is not the author's word count, I fantasized about it before I opened the book.

What would happen if Iron Man foresaw that the Iron Armor would be developed in advance in the future.

Personally, I thought it was very interesting, so I wrote this part of the content, but the reader doesn't seem to like it very much, and the subscription starts to decline from here.

Well, I know I'm wrong. I won't use a lot of space to describe other characters in the future. The plot of the main characters will also be explained clearly in one or two chapters.

The second point is that the protagonist is too weak and abused in all kinds of ways, making him feel aggrieved.

Um……

Heaven and earth conscience, I am not a masochist, I just simply want to create an evenly matched opponent, so that it is refreshing to win the final victory.

But the readers don't seem to see that the protagonist suffers, even if it is only temporarily, it may be that the writing is too sloppy and the protagonist is stupid.

The improvement on this point can only be to write less plots that are first suppressed and then improved. Since there is no way to write more intelligent and almost demon characters, it is better to open up and crush them all the way.

As a street writer, there must be a lot of faults in the novel. I welcome everyone to point out and I will accept it humbly.

But the comments are only limited to the content of the novel. If it involves personal attacks, I will directly delete the post and ban it, no matter what the fan level is.

Finally, I would like to ask all readers to support subscriptions. It is best to subscribe on the main site of the starting point. The author can pay more and be less slapped.

Writing a book is not easy, and dark text is even more difficult. Let’s watch and cherish it!

(End of this chapter)